Friday 3 November 2017

My teddy bear


I am learning to retell an event in my own words, using a beginning, middle and ending. I have tried to use different sentence starters to make my story interesting.

"I can sound out words in story writing. I am getting better at finger spaces and capitals and fullstops. I can do heaps of wow words for writing." Savelii

1 comment:

Mrs Worsfold said...

This is such a fabulous sketch of a bear. You have put in lots of detail.